Today I don't have much to say, so I'll share my latest poem with you. It's titled "Crazy Beautiful Desire". I'm trying something new in this one. I didn't rhyme as I always do, and I wrote it quickly. I know that I can write something so much better than this one, still I like it because it's a little about love. And I haven't written about love in a while.
I wrote this poem while I was thinking about fate, and things that happen in life. I hope that you like it and that you can relate to it. I'm also looking for some writing advice, if you have any suggestion or something that you think that can help me to improve my writing skills I would really appreciate it. I usually don't change much about my already written poems, but I think about it when I write something new. =)
Crazy Beautiful Desire
Crystal star, don't blame me for trying,
My heart's been longing to ask,
For this one last wish, upon the first star
I whisper, you listen: "Please, let him be mine"
One magical second, the right time and place,
Tomorrow fate could bring us together,
The distance existing between us would fade,
A whole new world, to share with my love.
His kiss would be the end of everything I know,
The beginning of a universe I would willingly adore,
This may never happen, but today's only a wish,
A hysterical illusion, a crazy beautiful desire.
We are all victims of our precious fate,
But, could fate be kind and give me his love?
As I walk away from you, crystal star shinning,
I can't wait for tomorrow...maybe he'll be mine.
I start school tomorrow, so I'll probably have something good to share with you. I'll probably do something stupid. =)
XoXo
Gaby
I wrote this poem while I was thinking about fate, and things that happen in life. I hope that you like it and that you can relate to it. I'm also looking for some writing advice, if you have any suggestion or something that you think that can help me to improve my writing skills I would really appreciate it. I usually don't change much about my already written poems, but I think about it when I write something new. =)
Crazy Beautiful Desire
Crystal star, don't blame me for trying,
My heart's been longing to ask,
For this one last wish, upon the first star
I whisper, you listen: "Please, let him be mine"
One magical second, the right time and place,
Tomorrow fate could bring us together,
The distance existing between us would fade,
A whole new world, to share with my love.
His kiss would be the end of everything I know,
The beginning of a universe I would willingly adore,
This may never happen, but today's only a wish,
A hysterical illusion, a crazy beautiful desire.
We are all victims of our precious fate,
But, could fate be kind and give me his love?
As I walk away from you, crystal star shinning,
I can't wait for tomorrow...maybe he'll be mine.
I start school tomorrow, so I'll probably have something good to share with you. I'll probably do something stupid. =)
XoXo
Gaby
4 Comments:
Thanks for visiting my blog! :) I like your poem!
Hey!!!!!!
sIEMPRE me gustan tus poemas... son tan jaja no se pero me gustan.. que asco de salon tienes de frances pero que le puedes hacenr?? es un semestre que vas a star ahi.. se qe puedes awantarlo jaja... ia sabes saca info de zuc jaja
Recuerda que le sabado vamos a la feria jeje byes
atte:sakura
Great poem, I truly love it. You're very talented.
Great work! I will use your text for a thing at school, I was supposed to bring a text from a song but my teacher allowed my to bring a poem. I must say that what you wrote was exactly what I was looking for, and i've been searching for this kind of text for many many days. So thank you for making it all so much easier :)
Post a Comment
<< Home